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C Simone's avatar

This was fantastic, I really enjoy how you zoom into characters and build them up!🙌✨️

Seraphim George's avatar

Thanks! This one was really exciting to write, but it was also kinda sad. Sorta like some Christmases… :P

Luke John's avatar

Wow... this one made me reconsider what I thought I already knew about this story... I kept waiting for him to admit to something horrible and then be somehow destroyed by Christmas... which... I suppose he was. But I had to reconsider where I thought they were and how it actually worked... hmm...

I absolutely love this line: "Kat watched him, and behind her ribs something old and watchful lifted its head". Brilliant.

Seraphim George's avatar

Thanks so much! The mystery continues... Happy New Year!

Jacob Josselyn's avatar

I was wondering why the baker was getting any attention. Interesting…

And man that is the saddest Santa ever.

Seraphim George's avatar

Sad Santa is sad… thanks for reading!